Lussac

Really enjoyed your story. Nice build-up of the characters.
Shame about a few spelling mistakes like:
house being reprocessed instead of repossessed, or taught face instead of taut (Hope you don't think that is being pernickety)
Look forward to reading more....

Fantastic!
Hope to read some more soon

Excellent story

Love it

this is beautiful!

I really enjoyed reading this. The very unexpected ending was brilliant!

please find time to write some more, you have talent

How tragic! And I love the end too....
Very well written, you have talent. I hope I can read some more of your stories.