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WOW - if this is true, I really feel for you. The writing is very powerful. The person you write about is not in the least 'selfish' at all but a very brave and beautiful person.
I wish you all the best

Fantastic story.....

How tragic! And I love the end too....
Very well written, you have talent. I hope I can read some more of your stories.

Great build up of tension..... & I just wasn't expecting the twist at the end. Hilarious!

Excellent! Made me laugh

this is beautiful!

Very well written.
Are you going to go further with the story?

I enjoyed it.
One thing I noticed though was maybe a little too much description at the intense moments e.g. "...entering the water, if only up to the laces of her hazel brown walking boots". In my opinion, it detracted from the tension. In other parts though your descriptions worked well.