Lussac

Great build up of tension..... & I just wasn't expecting the twist at the end. Hilarious!

Tragic!
Very well written piece

Great! I loved the suspense!
I think a word other than 'goo' would have been better though for the human remains.
(Also, a couple of spelling mistakes like 'whale' instead of 'wail' - hope that's not being pernickety.....)

Great - Very vivid imagery!

An honestly-written heart-felt account. Thank you for sharing.

The ending was so unexpected I had to just laugh out loud!

I'm not normally a poetry lover, but I do like this one very much.
I just have one question: is there a reason you used the word 'shined' instead of 'shone'?

Hilarious