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I liked this story.

I don't usually appreciate poetical prose, but I do really like this. I think you have talent, continue writing.....

So simple and so sweet! Write more...

Great short story. I liked much of the description throughout and also the hopeful ending

I'm not normally a poetry lover, but I do like this one very much.
I just have one question: is there a reason you used the word 'shined' instead of 'shone'?

I liked this. Very brave of you to continue actually writing whilst experiencing rough turbulence... although I imagine it must have been quite therapeutic.
I just noticed one tiny detail.... did you really have a 'handle' on your mug of tea???

I liked this.... Liked the way you show us Simon's 'annoying' characteristics drop by drop....
I could not imagine where the story was going either...
Hope you write some more....

Loved this story.