Lussac

Very well written.
Are you going to go further with the story?

So very sad!
You really drew me into your 'hurt'
I wish you all the best for the future...

Please do continue writing.... It can be very therapeutic

So simple and so sweet! Write more...

Looking forward to reading more.....

Really enjoyed it..... Let's just watch this space hey?

I liked this.... Liked the way you show us Simon's 'annoying' characteristics drop by drop....
I could not imagine where the story was going either...
Hope you write some more....

Had me engrossed - until the very last sentence.... Not sure about the "dream-end" though I must admit..... made me swap from a 5 star to 4 star