United States • 21 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
I like this whole astro-nature projection of imagery, if that is what you want to call it, for your world. I think I actually got lost in another dimension reading this. I'm just wonderin' what the "1:48am" title has to do with it? I'm guessing it was a dream that you've awaken from at the time or something along those lines, right?
Aww, so adorable. Just filled me right up.😊
So sweet!!! I love your flow of words. In my mind, it sounded sort of like a heartbeat, which really adds on to the love effect. You're an amazing writer! <3
omg. like i swear. i read this and like literally i felt smth in my damn heart. i've been thou a couple of breakups myself, and i can totally relate. this is one of the best peoms i've read, like ever. Awesome!!
I felt the same way about a chick. Some of the words you wrote I also used towards her, but never though will I see her the same way again after we broke apart and never I think will she love me or I'll love her.
Great poem.
Yo, this is cafe poetry reading worthy.
I'm a dude and just looking at the title scared me into believing that it would be just bashing guys, but now I see it is more about friendship and am happy about that. Having many friends that are chicks, I can actually relate to this. Usually women bond together after a heartache or a heartbreak and say, "you can do better" and, "he doesn't deserve your heart", so I totally see where you come from on this.
this is great--
my dog passed today so this hits hard-