United States • 20 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
I felt the same way about a chick. Some of the words you wrote I also used towards her, but never though will I see her the same way again after we broke apart and never I think will she love me or I'll love her.
Great poem.
omg. like i swear. i read this and like literally i felt smth in my damn heart. i've been thou a couple of breakups myself, and i can totally relate. this is one of the best peoms i've read, like ever. Awesome!!
So sweet!!! I love your flow of words. In my mind, it sounded sort of like a heartbeat, which really adds on to the love effect. You're an amazing writer! <3
Aww, so adorable. Just filled me right up.😊
I like this whole astro-nature projection of imagery, if that is what you want to call it, for your world. I think I actually got lost in another dimension reading this. I'm just wonderin' what the "1:48am" title has to do with it? I'm guessing it was a dream that you've awaken from at the time or something along those lines, right?
This perfectly describes how we all feel about dogs. Losing a dog just destroys us. Now after that our dog, Shadow, died, I now wave at his picture everyday missing him at every moment.
Talk about self inflicting wounds of love. That just describes it there.
Preach it girl.
My personal thought, if you ended with a self-statement like, "to make my mark.", I would give you the Italian perfecton gesture (like when food is made just perfect). In all aspect of it though, writing about how hard it is to write is the best way to feel like you did some qualty writing.