melissak

Haha, I am a ninja.

That was very interesting. And scary. You're doing a good job!

I'd say this is pretty chillaxed. I like it. Simple and neat, but still puts a little flame in our heart.

Maybe I’m biased because you’re my friend, but I really enjoyed this story. It could use some grammatical editing, but overall the story was interesting and I enjoyed it.

I like the way you tried to improve your rhyming skills! Good job!

I love the way this rhythms

This is a good story. You did good. There were a few places where it could use a comma or a semicolon, but its still a great story.

it's really good!