United States • 21 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
Maybe I’m biased because you’re my friend, but I really enjoyed this story. It could use some grammatical editing, but overall the story was interesting and I enjoyed it.
I love the way this rhythms
I like the way you tried to improve your rhyming skills! Good job!
That was very interesting. And scary. You're doing a good job!
it's really good!
This is a good story. You did good. There were a few places where it could use a comma or a semicolon, but its still a great story.
