melissak

So truthful it hurts.

I like it! You like writing these according to your other submissions, and I honestly enjoy reading them. There sometimes sad, but inspirational too.

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Sir Ayren seems like one of those people I read in mangas who are crooks. I'm not sure if he just seems that way or if he's actually a crook. I'm very interested in the boy with green eyes. I can already imagine the boy without a description. Also, did you mean: "a white woman with sleeves" instead of "a with woman with sleeves"

It seems like she's more worried about fashion and herself than the boy, who is yet to be named. She seems to be moving too fast into acceptance then she would be in real life. I would think she's still in shock and less worried about her wardrobe. It's a good book though and I hope you continue. Seems like somethings missing though, something crucial, but I can't put my finger on it.

Aww, it's so sad ;-;

I got a bit confused at the end, but overall I liked it

NIce.