melissak

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NIce.

Yeah nothing last forever, yet we promise forever without a care in the world. It's quite funny how things seem to turn out.

Like it, but I think it should be a bit more intriguing.

Spooky

Sir Ayren seems like one of those people I read in mangas who are crooks. I'm not sure if he just seems that way or if he's actually a crook. I'm very interested in the boy with green eyes. I can already imagine the boy without a description. Also, did you mean: "a white woman with sleeves" instead of "a with woman with sleeves"

I like it! You like writing these according to your other submissions, and I honestly enjoy reading them. There sometimes sad, but inspirational too.

I like it