United States • 21 y/oReviews Received
how could you do this to my hhheeeeaaarrrrttttt!!!!!!
Good job! That was intence.
OMG...this carries so many emotions., At first I'm like "Duu Du Du Du Du Du Du DUUU DU Du DUUU DU DUUUUUU..." Then I'm like "Well...he be dead..." and now I have to go curl up in a ball and cry in a corner if you excuse me.
Stop playing with my emotions Misty! First I thought she was going to be kidnapped(the gray colorless buildings) Then she was going to get married, and then he was going to die. But no! She was about to get married and I was all excited. Then BLAM! He dies, the wedding was a daydream, and my heart was crushed.
Very well written. I enjoyed reading it.
That was intense.
That's dark, but it's a true representation of some people's lives. Good job!
I really enjoyed your story, although i didn't expect this to be the direction it took. I kept trying to figure out what it was but when i actually found out, my heart broke just the slightest bit. You portrayed your characters very well and it made it seem all the more real. Good job!