Amber Jones

I really enjoyed your story, although i didn't expect this to be the direction it took. I kept trying to figure out what it was but when i actually found out, my heart broke just the slightest bit. You portrayed your characters very well and it made it seem all the more real. Good job!

Dang. A work of art that is held so true in many lives. The wanting of approval, but to speak one's mind never mixes well most times especially when it's a lifestyle and it is a shame.
Truly profound writing.

There is beauty in broken and what is great about broken things, they can usually be fixed. May not be in the best of shape, but it sure does help.
Fine writing. Flows like a calm river. Gentle, but filled with great bountiful meaning.

I really like this, good job

Oh how true this is.
To take away life that is made in oneself is to not only reject their life, but a part of your's also.

Wow! What a beautiful read!