Amber Jones

Dang. A work of art that is held so true in many lives. The wanting of approval, but to speak one's mind never mixes well most times especially when it's a lifestyle and it is a shame.
Truly profound writing.

There is beauty in broken and what is great about broken things, they can usually be fixed. May not be in the best of shape, but it sure does help.
Fine writing. Flows like a calm river. Gentle, but filled with great bountiful meaning.

I really like this, good job

Wow! What a beautiful read!

Oh how true this is.
To take away life that is made in oneself is to not only reject their life, but a part of your's also.

I think this is written quite well! I appreciate that, at least to me, it seems like more of an observation of pain than a description of it (if that makes any sense). It's interesting. While it's not really the tone that I like most of the time, it was enjoyable to read nonetheless. Keep up the good work!