Amber Jones

As far as the story goes, the grammar and English side of things could be improved. But once again you wrote a story that is great.

Pretty good...

There are so many different voices in our lives, constantly telling us to do something, pushing our decision in a certain direction. So there is a lot of pressure behind making a choice...Good job.

Do you plan to make this more of a suspense Fantasy? I feel like when someone is writing a suspense or a more "dark" story the descriptions that weave themselves into the story are key.

That was different. It definitely offers a different perspective on friends, and I feel like it's very relatable. Good job.