Amber Jones

I suppose in way this story paints a picture of what it's really like to move. We often get settled and attached to those around us, so when change threatens to rip us from that comfort we have a hard time letting it all go. So, good job! This is amazing.

Very interesting...

As far as the story goes, the grammar and English side of things could be improved. But once again you wrote a story that is great.

Pretty good...

There are so many different voices in our lives, constantly telling us to do something, pushing our decision in a certain direction. So there is a lot of pressure behind making a choice...Good job.