Amber Jones

Pretty good...

There are so many different voices in our lives, constantly telling us to do something, pushing our decision in a certain direction. So there is a lot of pressure behind making a choice...Good job.

That was different. It definitely offers a different perspective on friends, and I feel like it's very relatable. Good job.

Do you plan to make this more of a suspense Fantasy? I feel like when someone is writing a suspense or a more "dark" story the descriptions that weave themselves into the story are key.

I think I have to agree with this. It can be hard, this is so true.

I think the structure of the story is fantastic! It's definitely sad, but in a touching way. I think the way it was all written out was interesting, so keep writing!

Way to truly speak your mind here! Sometimes that's hard to do in this world when people shut down your opinion without really giving you a chance to express them. Good job.

I like the way you tried to improve your rhyming skills! Good job!