Amber Jones

This so touching, heart wrenching in a way. But it shows how it is in a way that can be understood. Fantastic job!

This is another amazing way to look at life, we all have trials and this poem illustrates that fact in a way all of us can appreciate.

Could be edited, but still. Wow. That was good.

I like the way you tried to improve your rhyming skills! Good job!

Maybe I’m biased because you’re my friend, but I really enjoyed this story. It could use some grammatical editing, but overall the story was interesting and I enjoyed it.