United Kingdom • 21 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
This painted such a great picture of the room, and the emotions..wonderful to read!
oh i was waiting for it to continue! don't stop in the middle!
I don't usually appreciate poetical prose, but I do really like this. I think you have talent, continue writing.....
I'm not sure what this made me feel... But I like it!
Thats a thinker ! I like it.
Now for a real review, if brief. The writing is very flowry, and poetic, and beautiful despite a few grammatical errors. The idea is really captivating, and I really like the part about the paw prints.
aw, man, i cant do sexual things- let me know when it gets back to normal so I can hop back in tho! For your typos, I suggest Grammarly. It can be wrong sometimes, so u have to keep an eye on it, but most of the time it's really helpful! I don't think Valentine is the right Match for Theodosia. He seems unable to understand the fact that a woman is more than an object, as he said, "Are you going to take advantage of me?" It sounds to me like he just wants to, uh, take advantage of her. I don't really like him. I'm also mad at Dorian now though, for leaving his sister alone for so many years. I hope their relationship can mend. And in the meantime, maybe he can save Theodosia from Valentine's greedy personality.
The story feels very real. A good read and hope to see more.