Mitzi Danielson-Kaslik

nice one

i love it

As usual you write vivid descriptions, and the central character's decline is renfered convincingly.

same here

This is astonishing!
The deep, thick, heavy imagery is like you are painting a high-detailed moving picture with words to make it mystical and give it the movement that makes it come alive in our brains to create what we see, what we think and feel.
A true work of art.
Just like what Lynnyan said, you are talented and deserve more and the best.