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United States • 25 y/o • Male
This is some sad stuff right here, I feel you. Keep up the work!
Coming from a song writer, the rhyme scheme in this poem would work perfectly for lyrics!
This is a very good poem and I love all of your stories this one reminds me of well me
it made me cry because the story was like my life until i got away from it its lovly
you have a great way with words
How tragic! And I love the end too.... Very well written, you have talent. I hope I can read some more of your stories.
i love it!!
You know i like sad stories, and this is the only one that makes me feel sad. i hope you do well.