NorthernPhoenix

I think the story is great and I like how you change the mood of the story slightly every time it gives a sense of evolution to the characters that would not be seen otherwise. Keep it up you are doing a great job.

I enjoyed your story. Well done.

I love the vibe this story gives! Very fairy tale esque, which is a bop. As for the mushrooms, I honestly wouldn't have noticed if not for the other reviews pointing them out. That is to say, I don't have a problem with them, because the focus isn't necessarily the mushrooms, but that she knows about them.

Love the feather visuals. Love the atmosphere. Word choice is kinda flowery, but not bad by any means.

I like the way this is written; how it's an analogy, but also just a fun little snippet of some gossips at a ball or whatever. It's fun to imagine what the people I know in life would wear, or what I would wear, in this world. Nice work.

I want this to be an animated short film