NorthernPhoenix

I'm not really sure what to say about this. Writing-wise, I like how it's all dialogue. I love how the tone of each voice shifts at the end.
It also made me feel sad. I couldn't quite relate to all the details, but I could definitely relate to the overall idea and feel.
It's wonderful writing, and you've given me something to think about.

Very simple and to the point. I think you did a good job. There's a point where you wrote "March" when I think you meant "much", but otherwise, I think it's pretty good.

I don't really know what to say, except that I love this.

I was surprised by how much I enjoyed this. I loved the characters and the way you wrote the whole scene. It was quite delightful!

I like the way you tease at there being more to the story than what you show without making it too confusing to keep up with.

I absolutely love this story! It's so soulfully written and beautiful to imagine. I love the way that you use repetition throughout the story. It's wonderfully done.

This was super satisfying to read. I really love the rhetoric, the message, and the whole general feel of it. Thanks for sharing!