United States • 21 y/o • TransgenderReviews Received
Woah. That was brutal. My feelings just kinda crumbled in the corner. The turns, the changes, the effects. I don't know how to feel about this, my emotions have blended together into everything. I find myself feeling overjoyed, depressed, surprised, humored, and everything all at once. Maybe that makes me insane. Otherwise, It was a little tough to get through, so I recommend spreading out your paragraphs, and starting a new line for speech. Some grammer mistakes, but otherwise, the story is amazing. You are so close. "You're ripped at every edge but you're a masterpiece" You are so close.
OMG OMG OMG I LOVE IT>>> LOVE IT>>> LOVE ITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOOOOOOVE IT MY MAN HAMILTON. I ship anything😂😂
Very different style of writing than I'm used to, probably could use some grammar touch ups, but other than that I loved it!
I´m a little bit of a Hamilton nerd because my sister used to listen to it all of the time...XD...Gotta love Hamilton
Im actually not a fan of Hamilton but
YOUR STORY IS A MASTERPIECE!!!
this is amazing! very well written as well
MORE. GIVE ME MORE!!!
I love it it makes my happy p.s. Jefferson should haved yelled at lee to leave him alone or john