Oxygen

I am so sorry, if you need to talk know I'm here.

It's a nice, inspiring poem. Uprising. It's one that would shine out of a rainy day.

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I'm so sorry

It doesn't particularly strike out as hard as I think you were going for. However, I know at least two people it's going to hit hard to. And even if it didn't strike me, I could still feel it's emotion.

Dang. Short, yet deep. And yes, I do understand the meaning. People sometimes only sees the surface of this poem, but I can see all the way to the bottom. The setting, (Catalina?), the pills (not gonna spill ;P), the friendship.

Anyway, great poem! Keep up the good work!