Oxygen

AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! So good. I love the part where Mark sings the songs to his dad. Can't wait for you to write more!!!! Keep up the great work!

I remember this. I love it. It is sad though. Keep on writing! :D

I actually really like this poem. I think it is a way of telling someone that you still care about them but you don't really feel like listening to their problems. I think the only thing that ticked me off was that is was a little harsh, but if that was what you were aiming for then it's a good poem. Keep on writing. You are a great writer and have a lot of potential. TIP: write more poems to get better at writing poems, it actually really helps. :)

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH, why is this so good, but creepy.

AHHHHH so good!!! keep up the good work!!!!

I can totally relate Faith. I really liked this poem. It was short but deep. Small but meaningful. Keep up the good work.

I found this story funny and it made me laugh so hard. I really liked it. Keep on writing.

I go through this a lot.This poem/story is very good way to let all of that anger out. But remember you must be proud of who you are. You must take pride in your success and acknowledge your failures. Stay positive and keep on writing stories.