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Rachel Elizabeth

18 y/o

"See how the world could be, in spite of the way that it is" -Hadestown

Reviews Received

lyngbakr82
𝕝𝕪𝕟𝕘𝕓𝕒𝕜𝕣𝟠𝟚 reviewed Fairytale

Yay! First of all, I love the song you’re referencing in the first couple lines. Second of all, this poem is lovely. You did good :)

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hercules
hercules reviewed Fairytale

A delightful poem. I certainly believe in fairies and other beings of the Elemental kingdom, like dragons and unicorns. Well done.

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lyngbakr82
𝕝𝕪𝕟𝕘𝕓𝕒𝕜𝕣𝟠𝟚 reviewed Lonely

“trapped in a fragile hour glass
pelted by the slowly falling sand
waiting for someone to notice me
but for now
I'm lonely”

Wow. Just wow. I really like this one. Nicely done.

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hazel_basil
hazel basil reviewed Slay the Dragon

awwwww rachel this is sooo cuuuuttee

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lyngbakr82
𝕝𝕪𝕟𝕘𝕓𝕒𝕜𝕣𝟠𝟚 reviewed Story Not Found

love the rhyming scheme in this one! i really like how you worded this

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hazel_basil
hazel basil reviewed Dear Queen

#alwaysforeverandintoeternity

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lyngbakr82
𝕝𝕪𝕟𝕘𝕓𝕒𝕜𝕣𝟠𝟚 reviewed Don't Chase Me

good for you for choosing to move beyond this challenge <3 great job with this poem

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Charlotte_Anne
charlotte anne reviewed Don't Chase Me

so good! great job :)

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