Reviews Given
Oh, My God! I couldn't stop laughing for about 5 minutes while and after reading this impossibly comical story! I loved your writing style, aH! ***ahahaha*** excuse me, I have to LAUGH A LOT.
A lovely piece of satire!
It was a really amazing story; I loved the theme. I heart how suspense takes over at the last. The end of this chapter leaves the readers wondering what'd be happening next.
Overall, nice effort. But, it had some inconsistencies.
Loved it! Amazing! I can't wait to read more of it.
Excellent! I want MORE!!!
Mind-blowing descriptions.
It's a very meanngful poem which (poetically) makes us realise how bad times have become. Time flies...
Oh! That started out so mournful and then ended up absolutely thrilling! Can't wait to read more (if there's more, that is)!!!
I loved your writing style. So far your story has a good pacing. :-)