PinkyTune

Truly magnificent. I am speechless. Yes, we are blind. We see what's outside, and are blind to what's inside. External beauty charms us, but often truly it might not be beautiful inside. To a blind man, what's inside attracts him. In reality, we with sight are blinder than the ones with no sight.

Excellent!

Indeed, it can be observed that the greatest of men treat the physically disabled/challenged harshly. The entire society views them as useless brats born to die without honour.

This piece of writing briefly describes this bitter and cruel truth in elegant words.

But, there are some mistakes present in the writing.
"...as painful and anything inflicted by a real weapon."
In many instances, you forget the Oxford Comma.

Oh! That started out so mournful and then ended up absolutely thrilling! Can't wait to read more (if there's more, that is)!!!

I loved your writing style. So far your story has a good pacing. :-)

Oh, My God! I couldn't stop laughing for about 5 minutes while and after reading this impossibly comical story! I loved your writing style, aH! ***ahahaha*** excuse me, I have to LAUGH A LOT.

A lovely piece of satire!

Really helpful!

It was a really amazing story; I loved the theme. I heart how suspense takes over at the last. The end of this chapter leaves the readers wondering what'd be happening next.

Overall, nice effort. But, it had some inconsistencies.

Simply amazing! Brilliant. A poor child's innocence... Abusive Father... Helpless mother... Every single thing is so subtly conveyed with so little text. Children have the amazing ability to speak cute and short.