Despicable_Moi

I had to read this several times throughout the day cuz I love it soooo much. Idk if other people see it this way, but to me it felt deep, but not unbearably so. Like, it's not overthought, it just is. I really have no other way to explain that. I also really like the rhyming. The scheme wasn't the same exactly, but I feel like where the rhyming words were just made each section really click. Once again, I loveee it! And I can't wait to read more from you!!! :D

Beautiful! <3
That hook is amazing; right from the first line I felt that I was really drawn into what would be said next. Hooks are something I really struggle with, so I can recognize a really well written one when I see it.
I also just really love it in general. When I read this, it was a little crazy because I was imagining like inspirational music in the background and the ending really showed how the speaker's views had changed. Spectacular!!! <3

oooo... I wonder what will happen at the bar.

Great job! Your stories are amazing. It is evident that you put a lot of time and effort into what you create. Keep writing and inspiring!!!

Ca-rhys-ta??? Love the story so far! <3

Interesting start!

This story sounds like the beginning of something brilliant! I was a little confused as it progressed, but idrc, it'll probably make more sense later on. I can't wait to read more!
And congratulations on your accomplishments!!! 🎉🎊🎈🎉🎊🎈🎉🎊🎈🎉🎊🎈🎉🎊🎈🎉🎊🎈🎉🎊🎈🎉🎊🎈🎉🎊🎈🎉🎊🎈

Oooo chills. I was not expecting that. The development of the story and description you used was really amazing!