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Deep words that are written in such a way that connects the reader with the feelings of loss and despair that you suffer.
An elegant poem covering the thing that clouds over most people's mind at some point in their life; death.
I love emotive stories like this. Good job - keep up the good work!
Great story. Look forward to reading more!
Thanks to your way of writing, I didn't have trouble immersing in this poem. This depiction can be a sad reality for some. Good job on bringing the point forward.
I think many nine-to-fivers can relate.
Thank you for the well-written story.
Thank you for your submission. You are a talented writer.