Rich Powell

Great short story for one to reflect upon their own positivity.

Definitely something I'd want to read to children at night. Well done and keep up the great poetry.

I think many nine-to-fivers can relate.

Thank you for your submission. You are a talented writer.

Thank you for the well-written story.

Great story. Look forward to reading more!

Thanks to your way of writing, I didn't have trouble immersing in this poem. This depiction can be a sad reality for some. Good job on bringing the point forward.

An elegant poem covering the thing that clouds over most people's mind at some point in their life; death.