Scorlily11

It's a little too dark for me but, that's just me. I'm sure others will love this much as I did.

This story interested me. The only questions I have are:
1) Shouldn't he have washed the blood off?
2) Did he feel ne remorse at all? He just killed his whole family.
3) Why didn't he just run away?
4) Shouldn't his sister like it because he went through a lot of trouble to get it?
Other than that it was a really nice story. It just needs a little editing are revising. It's a little confusing too.

This brought tears to my eyes. Some might look upon this as creepy, others as confusing. I, on the other hand find this pure beauty and sorrow. A beautiful black rose with beads of frozen water on its petals and frozen water climbing up its velvety black stem in a room of black marble walls and floor also represents sorrow and beauty. This is more beautiful because it has one very important quality in it, remorse. We didn't need to know ow she died, those were details that you decided not to add and you pulled it off perfectly. In the end, she cut because she felt as if she shouldn't have done what she did. She realized that her daughter is the only one she has now. She loved her before she died, because she killed herself to be with her. Now, they can be together.

Did Joanna die? Great story by the way. It's sad that her daughter had to see that. That was unexpected that the two in the basement were Jacob and Joanna. I thought it was someone who found her recording and then kidnapped Jacob.

I love how this is written in a dog's point of view. It's sad and beautiful. Dogs know how people feel and try to comfort them or they share the emotion. We rarely ever think about how they feel. They are man's best friend but, are we dog's best friend? Do we really deserve the friendship they give us. Dogs are left behind or forgotten when people reach new levels in life. But, it is almost as if dog's purpose is to make us humans that show no appreciation towards our pets, (in this case friends) smile. There are some people out there that care deeply about their animal companions. Others forget that at some point they could or were their only family. Thank you for making me realize this. I had a pet rabbit once but, I only realized how close I was to her when she ran away. I was devastated when I found her on the side of the road with tire tracks showing on her small body, three days later. It is like the saying, You never know how much you love something until it's gone.