Sepperince

This is great I like how you always end on a suspenseful note it makes you want to read more. Can't wait for more.

This is an intriguing start.

I think the story is great and I like how you change the mood of the story slightly every time it gives a sense of evolution to the characters that would not be seen otherwise. Keep it up you are doing a great job.

This makes me want to cry.

This was amazing. The suspense was awful that only made it better.

That was amazing. I sort of reminded me of a Percy Jackson type thing.