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Another interesting submission - but take care. It is not good practice to use numerals in prose: numbers should be written in full. Similarly, abbreviations are also not acceptable. Thus, '32' should be written 'thirty-two'. Your computer's spell-check and thesaurus facility will help you to avoid these minor issues in future works.
This was surprisingly dark and deep. An excellent effort from a very active imagination. I look forward to reading more of your work :-)
A sad little short story. Rather cute in the beginning too.
Another interesting submission - but take care. It is not good practice to use numerals in prose: numbers should be written in full. Similarly, abbreviations are also not acceptable. Thus, '75 mph' should be written 'seventy-five miles per hour'. Your computer's spell-check and thesaurus facility will help you to avoid these minor issues in future works.