United States • 20 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
It ain't about how hard you can hit, It's how hard you can get hit and still move forward.
:Rocky Balboa
Ä° know you cant confess what you feel. cuz of the other girl.
But maybe you can make him see it with your actings.
Make him feel that he is free and happy when youre around.
Ä° hope best for you.
Ä°f nothing changes dont push it.
Always see the picture from right side.
Ä°f you need to forget see his negative sides
So heartfelt! I relate to this a lot. I’m going through a similar situation.
Keep up the AWESOME writing! ʕ •ᴥ•ʔ
6th line you put an extra d on convinced.
Nice, I really like it.
Very nice poetry. I love how nicely it flows. ðŸ‘
In the first line I think you meant to say Keep out all of instead of keep out of all.