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First line you said there ws insead of there was.

If you have fish in your golden water then you need to see a doctor.

Cannot is one word.
other than that this is a really good poem.

I can totally relate.

I love this! I can never say this in reality, but you summarize it up and make it look so easily. I love it! I love it so much! Keep writing! We will keep reading!

Amazing! especially as it's your first short story, I am impressed