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United States • 23 y/o • Female
Hi
Nice. Great smilies. Metaphors? I get the two mixed up....
The ending sounds great but doesn't really finish feeling satisfied.... I think it's because there isn't a rhyme there, but I don't know for sure. Keep writing!
I have to have more of this. Please continue writing!
Definitely a premise for a continuation. An intriguing build-up for the main plot line. I hope that you write more.
Looks promising. Please write some more!
Write more please!!
Ooh, this looks interesting. I want to see how it ends!
Coming from a country where the weather is notoriously fickle, I can relate to this. Well done.