TheForgotten

I tend to like short and brisk stories such as this one, they tell you a lot without saying much.

This poem expresses deep thought on a very sensitive subject, and I liked it a lot. I hope you continue to write amazing poems like this!

I thought this piece was beautifully written. It's a lovely poem

It has a very pleasant flow. It's also an extremely important topic which has proven to be a problem in many people's lives and I think you illustrated that beautifully :)

A lovely poem about heart break

I really enjoyed this, I think the structure was well put together and word usage was great. I hope to see more from you in the future!

You did an amazing job at pulling the reader into the scene, it was lovely :)

I really liked this poem. I feel slang can be used appropriately, and it definitely was in this one. I didn't really run into any snags other than a little in the beginning when I did see a small amount of "forced" rhyming. Otherwise I thought it was rather lovely