TheForgotten

It has a very pleasant flow. It's also an extremely important topic which has proven to be a problem in many people's lives and I think you illustrated that beautifully :)

The story was well written and the story keeps the reader's attention well. A job well done. And thank you for your service.

Personally I felt the story was absolutely amazing. The idea was great, and the characters were fantastic, there's a lot of detail to each of their personalities. Good job! I look forward to future stories.

I really liked this poem, it flowed well and it had a sweet mother like feel to it. I believe it's a very relate able topic, suicide is often thought about daily for some. Good job!

Very well written. It really gets to the reader and allows for them to feel something. Great job!

I really liked this story. I love how you incorporated well known characters from a vast amount of children's stories into an investigation to figure out what really happened to Humpty. Brilliant!

I really liked this particular piece. The story line was cute, and I know I'll probably sound silly but reading this just made me happy. Very well done.

I really loved the idea for this story. I like how instead of the "creatures under our beds" being the monsters a human is. One little flaw I noticed was it was somewhat hard to identify which creature was which (I may just have a hard time keeping up though), but overall I really liked it. I hope to see more!