TheForgotten

I really liked this story. I love how you incorporated well known characters from a vast amount of children's stories into an investigation to figure out what really happened to Humpty. Brilliant!

I noticed this story is tagged as Non-Fiction I'm so sorry for your loss.

I really liked this particular piece. The story line was cute, and I know I'll probably sound silly but reading this just made me happy. Very well done.

I thought the story was rather good in my opinion. I liked the theme of this piece, you had very good description. I don't think it got to a point of unbearable 'preachy' tone. Keep writing, I like the direction this story is going!

I really loved the idea for this story. I like how instead of the "creatures under our beds" being the monsters a human is. One little flaw I noticed was it was somewhat hard to identify which creature was which (I may just have a hard time keeping up though), but overall I really liked it. I hope to see more!

I liked this poem and how it was put together. Good job, as always.

While definitely interesting I found this story to be a rather good angle on a normal action.

I've been trying to keep up with this series in my small amounts of free time lately, I'd like to see where this could head.