TheForgotten

That was very lovely. I like the soft tone to it and it flows nicely. A job well done!

Very inspiring story, you are doing a great job!

You did an amazing job at pulling the reader into the scene, it was lovely :)

I really liked this, it flows well. Good job! :)

It has a very pleasant flow. It's also an extremely important topic which has proven to be a problem in many people's lives and I think you illustrated that beautifully :)