Optimism101

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Well, whoever that is, they better as hell never leave.

I love this! I can never say this in reality, but you summarize it up and make it look so easily. I love it! I love it so much! Keep writing! We will keep reading!

I get that. It's like a way to cover up your feelings without anyone knowing that's how you feel. Or it could be used to make an offensive joke. Either way.

So much... pain. Suffering, and emotion. I know whoever did this to you would be sorry after reading this. And... I'm sorry you had to go through this. This sounds like hell with no return.

You know, I was curious why you weren't active
Then I thought you were working on something
I was right
This is beautiful
Very energetic, and sweet
You did a good job
and yes loveling11 is a spammer, i got like 5 separate messages from them and finally blocked them

It's interesting. I see a vigilante scenario where you have someone just going against those that abuse. However, that quickly changes at the end. It's very good, and the writing is interesting. The poems seem to get better as the story goes on, with the last one being the best. This might be a literary device, or practice, but overall I enjoyed it. Keep writing! We will keep reading!

I like it. you have an interesting inn, with an interesting story. I personally hope that we get to see more of the inn, however, you are more likely to talk about the king's story, and that will be interesting too. Can't wait for the next part! Keep writing! We will keep reading!