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TheValhallan is from US United States • 20 y/o • Male

"If you don't have any festivity and just have negativity then there's no chance you'll make it far in life" Kevin- C Students

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THIS IS ME by cricket

That's a good you. Not just a nice autobiography piece, but it helps for empowerment too!
Good job!

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tear it apart by scorp

Ouch

I truly hope this isn't based off of past or present circumstances. However, it is a good piece. Very good. Nice rhyming work. Some of those words could be improved for a better rhyme, but otherwise it is very nice.

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Who Are You, and Do You Still Love Me Like You Did? by Oxygen

"Where are you now?" It's not a bad poem. It is a sort of chaotic, that connects to someones fear of losing them. Maybe one day you should try happy poems. I bet they would uplift more people than ever were down.

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Counting Sheep by scorp

It's a good one! I like it, but then again, I kinda like everything. Guess that's just kinda how this works :P.

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Writing by scorp

haha you have writers block
Okay sorry I just needed to say that.
First off, I liked what you did with the whole writing thing, where everything is like that.
But also like for real that happens all the time with me too XD.
Good job!

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Rise by scorp

Nice lyrics, king of anything is a goodie. I like it... and don't. I mean, it's always nice to have this sort of song, but hate needs to be forgived :P. You will probs gladly proove me wrong, but it's just what I think.

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I Wonder by Tiffany

You shouldn't wonder those stupid.... wait.... this is an autobiography?!?!?!?! NO! Hey! People wonder, people care. People out there will always worry and wonder for you. It's a sad musing, and makes everyone think, but still. HEY! People care. They always will.

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