Optimism101

It's not... not that bad. I mean, you tried. THat's most that counts. Nice little baby thriller. You could probably scare a squirrel.
No hard Feelings

*insert deviation of "haha" here*
Funny, nice one.
A little overused, but you played it out in such a way that it kinda went away from the norm.
Good One!
Can't wait for the next one.
Keep writing! We will keep reading!

Oh my god yeah. Happens all the time. It's soo frustrating. Nice poem-story! It's a bit of both in my opinion, in yours, I might be wrong. Anyways, its very representative of the truth. Nice one! Keep writing! We will keep reading!

I like it! Genetic modification has wonders on a universe, not only that but you have managed to turn them into soldiers, it's wonderful! Very interesting. Shows everything from her perspective too, she hates what she is, what she's doing, but is powerless to stop it, whether by choice or force. That is at least how I see it. Keep writing! We will keep reading!

Yes, they would.

I feel like you could, and should. You mention Fate, but not like fate. You use it as a person, or a something. So that begs the question of what is doing this? I feel like you could go places with this one. Keep Writing! We will keep reading!

Everyone does.
Don't know if it was intended, but the story has 123 words, which is pretty sweet.
Everyone breaks
You just gotta know how to piece yourself back together.

Wow. Transformation, and difference. Makes me wanna grab a hammer if ya know what I'm saying. Nice one! Glad to see you doing writes! Keep writing! We will keep reading!