United States • 23 y/o • MaleReviews Received
An interesting concept for a story.
It reminds me of a classic horror film where a haunted castle (in this case, a shack) is high on the rocks in the sea mixed with Coraline vibes.
aMaZiNg!! i really loved how at the end you said "the boy in the blue t-shirt" it really made it kind of mysterious. but i also enjoyed how its like a letter. KEEP WRITING!! :P
I don't really know what to say, except that I love this.
I was surprised by how much I enjoyed this. I loved the characters and the way you wrote the whole scene. It was quite delightful!
Nice^^ it feels like i'm the one who said the coward thing HIHI~~
I enjoyed your poem. Well done.
I'm not really sure what to say about this. Writing-wise, I like how it's all dialogue. I love how the tone of each voice shifts at the end.
It also made me feel sad. I couldn't quite relate to all the details, but I could definitely relate to the overall idea and feel.
It's wonderful writing, and you've given me something to think about.
I think you did a pretty good job keeping the action going. I liked the urgency the battery percentage gave throughout the story. I, personally, found the setting almost as intriguing as the scenario. It would be interesting to read more.