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Thomas Ray

ThomastheRay is from US United States • 22 y/o • Male

Hi, welcome to my profile. If you'd like feedback on your writing send me a message!

Reviews Received

ASwordslasher
ASwordslasher reviewed Ka

A relatable slice of life 👍👍
Keep it up 😁

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-Lynnyan-
Lyn reviewed The New House

I loved this! Feeling like the place you used to know is suddenly something entirely different is very relatable. When something drastic happens, it can change your perspective entirely. I love how this story emphasizes that. Well done 👍

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hercules
hercules reviewed The New House

I really enjoyed your story. I get drawn to such stories about creepy old houses haunted by ghosts and zombies every now and then. Well done.

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-Lynnyan-
Lyn reviewed Dialogue

Incredible use of dialougue to tell a story. I wonder what happened between them...
Whatever, I like the sense of wonder I'm getting from this so I'm not going to try to figure it out. Good job!

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LeCat127
LeCat127 reviewed Invisible Boy

Holy heck. I feel like my entire life in regards to other people has been summarized here. I kinda consider myself to be an invisible person, and this just... words.
Good writing.

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LeCat127
LeCat127 reviewed The Boy

Ooh, I actually really like this! It sounds like it should be a song.

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NorthernPhoenix
NorthernPhoenix reviewed Maybe He Could

I like the way you tease at there being more to the story than what you show without making it too confusing to keep up with.

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lyngbakr82
𝕝𝕪𝕟𝕘𝕓𝕒𝕜𝕣𝟠𝟚 reviewed The Boy

this rhyming! it spoke right to my heart. keep at it! i can't wait to see what you write next

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