United States • 22 y/o • MaleReviews Received
Um, did I miss something or is the boy still unnamed?
Sounds good so far, but this was very strange. I already guessed about her being important, but I'm confused on the voices. They like Lu and Blue (it rhymes) and shes the key to Ren. It may just be my head wanting a romance, but I'm begining to think those two have a little something for each other. I'm probably wrong though. She's a strong girl who zones out a lot and I'm curious on what the true motives of those voices are. It's quite strange. I wanna read more and finish this mystery!!
This was really funny. The end is usally what happens to me with most of my stoires! XD
I love it!
In answer to your question about Lli's irrational assumptions about his parents' deaths, it might be cause to the fact that we as people(regardless of our class, since this seems to play no role in our ability to rationalize) have a tendency to find a reason for everything. We are constantly looking to place a label or reason on everything so that we can better comprehend it. So in sence, it would seem that Lli is so shocked about this traumatic event, that he abandoned any rational conclusions(emotions tend to cloud all rational thoughts, which seems to be why many characters would seek revenge) and was simply trying to come to a conclusion that makes sense to him, wich in this case is that there HAS to be a "reason" for their deaths.
I think it's amusing, it definitely shows a lot about you. And in remark to your comment below your title, I should have you know that NO story is a waste of time. And can be later built upon or even viewed by a reader as creative and something they NEVER would have thought of themselves. I also thought the jump between the point of view of the story being written within your story to the author in your actual story, was an interesting element that definitely added to your story.
I felt this. I felt everything that the character (Morgan right?) was feeling. This is amazing.
This made me laugh because it's so true! I have so many inspirations, ideas swarming my head like a beehive and then when I finally settle down to write, I think it's horrible.
I had a great laugh and keep up the great work!
Haha, I really liked this story. I understand this struggle so much!