United States • 22 y/o • MaleReviews Received
I love this. It was so creative and clever!
I really liked this, and kinda hated it but only because it was sad yet loved it!
This made me think of a friend of mine, for some reason.
I noticed a lot of people asking for more of this, and I don't know if you have written more or not, but I think it's actually quite good as a standalone, just a snippet of story that is what it is.
You could cut 'by any stretch of the imagination' and still convey the essential point. Nonetheless its a good portrayal of a man too proud to ask for help. Our culture puts a lot of pressure on us to be perfect but few if any of us are.
Well, I think I get what you're saying here, at least in my own way. Good prose, by the way.
As with the first part, you evoke your characters' emotions well.
You caught a plausible situation in a few paragraphs.
I've had this problem before. Honestly I don't have any idea what the best course of action is when wanting to say something but being afraid of what will happen if you do, but this certainly captures the uncertainty of the situation.