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Thomas Ray

ThomastheRay is from US United States • 21 y/o • Male

Hi, welcome to my profile. If you'd like feedback on your writing send me a message!

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Yells After Wars by ASwordslasher

This is very good.

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The Past by TheForgotten

Nice. Great smilies. Metaphors? I get the two mixed up....

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Real Beauty by ASwordslasher

Very very cool. I don't mind messy poems, and I feel like this one is perfect this way.

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Run Rabbit Run by StephLiBen

This is so good! Upload more please.
Michael and Avery already have a dynamic I know I'll love. Oh, and the writing feels professional enough to make me feel like I'm reading a published e-book.

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Secrets (Chapter 1) by melissak

Here's my rating again. Ugh, I can't believe I deleted that.

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Opinion #1 by melissak

Depression is a sympton, not an illness in and of itself. And what feels so wrong about therapy is that people with depression don't want to be fixed. They already feel broken, they don't want to be treated like a malfunctioning machine.

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Angel of Music by Mitzi Danielson-Kaslik

Are all your stories this descriptive? I feel like if you wrote a book I'd read it even just because you seem to know how to describe things meticulously and yet make it so engaging. I certainly feel like I've seen this theater before.
These are original stories, right?

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The House of the Rising Sun by Mitzi Danielson-Kaslik

Well. I'm not sure how to say what I'm feeling, so I'll say I love it and hope that says what it should. Seriously, this was so overwhelmingly descriptive! I love the feel of it, it's just so good!

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