United States • 22 y/o • MaleReviews Given
I want this to be an animated short film
I... I don't know what to say. I'm speechless.
Love the feather visuals. Love the atmosphere. Word choice is kinda flowery, but not bad by any means.
Easily my favorite part of the story so far. It flows better, and the dialogue was fun and showed the characters' personalities nicely.
I'm excited for the rest.
Still like this.
...
Well. This is satisfying.
I love it.
Very emotional. Very immersive. You're probably getting annoyed with these five stars, but honestly, "good" just doesn't cut it
The descriptions, like you said, are excessive, and if you don't feel like actively immersing yourself in it, it's probably impossible to get through this whole story. BUT, when I did immerse myself in it, it was pretty incredible how many layers of beauty were here, and how vividly I could see/hear/smell the forest.