United States • 43 y/o • MaleReviews Received
Strong and in the moment. Very nice
Thank you for your powerful poem.
Wow. That really got my mind thinking, and sometimes that can be dangerous 😆. Great job! A few grammar and punctuation errors but it sounds amazing!
Very powerful and sends an emotional experience to all the readers. You accidentally said site instead of sight near the end, but besides that it sounds great!
Terrific!
Many will relate to your words, especially the more world-weary amongst us I suspect...
Great stuff. I look forward to more from you in due course.
i think this is a great story, i would love to read more like them