United States • 56 y/oReviews Received
Good story! Hope you got an A in the class. When I write, I love creating a character out something that is inanimate, like you blanket.
A very unusual story and a little chilling, for some reason. A brilliant idea, though.
pretty wizard bro
This is such a great lesson and story! I love it and you must make more!!!! There's nothing wrong with this story so don't listen to Apemann!! Your a amazing writer and please keep on writing stories!
The part when the blanket comes alive really detaches from the story and makes it seem confusing and it doesn't fit in with the theme. If you just left it where she threw it out and was sad, that is a lot better than the jumbled mess of personification you made. Other than that, it's a pretty good story.
Very well,inspirational story. Great job.