United States • 56 y/oReviews Received
Awesome story!! ^.^
this story is very inspiring! Love It!
Absolutely love this story! Very well written...the writer really brings Olivia's character to life. Love that Olivia never lets anything hold her back.
Very well written story with great build up.
Very well,inspirational story. Great job.
The part when the blanket comes alive really detaches from the story and makes it seem confusing and it doesn't fit in with the theme. If you just left it where she threw it out and was sad, that is a lot better than the jumbled mess of personification you made. Other than that, it's a pretty good story.
