Zack

That really did get intense! lol Great story!

Really nice poem! and nicely written.

Noice! My mom has always tried to make me do things and I know I disappoint her because of that, but she didn't know why I didn't want to do the things she wanted me to until recently. (for the past year technically, actually I take that back. 2 years!) :) Don't be the person on the outside, become the person on the inside.

so sad....I LIKE IT!

yes, You go live like a boy! And never give up!

Bootyful

This is really good, you're very smart. I'm glad that someone can point that out because I find it a problem, even at home. My siblings know that I want to be a boy, but one of them is contently saying, "But you're a girl. You're not a dude, so stop acting like it." It can be hard and I try to explain it, but then my mom overhears and gets mad, so thank you. People NEED to start understanding this.

I look forward to reading the other parts, cheese ball. It's nice and yeah :)